“Finally, my time has come for me to prove myself” I thought positively. “I can get into this professional prestigious karate school” I said to myself. I prayed for God to give me strength for the task ahead of me. Leaping from rock to rock, with a tenuous grip, I eventually reached the tip of the mountain. Dangling dangerously at the top of the cliff, my exhausted body managed to heave myself onto the flat rocky ledge.
Looking straight ahead, I could see a path heading to the karate school. Each step I took towards the palace, I got more and more excited. Looking up, I saw a huge door before me. ’Knock, knock, knock..’ The master sensei opened the door. I bowed before him, but he pointed away. I sighed as I walked away sadly.
To Be Continued......
Your writing is very descriptive and I can see and feel the character.
ReplyDeleteNice work Starford
-Joshua