Monday, May 9, 2011

Vote for the best Introdution

I have written three introductions. The first 2 introductions that have action and the last one is feelings, Please comment on the best one you like.

Have you seen fast and furious 5? Well myfamily and I went to the Hoyt's Cinemas in Sylvia Park for the Easter holidays,and it was AMAZING!!!!
As the movie started (Fast And Furious 5) I was nervously waiting for my Dad and my brothers to hurry up and bring the pop corn, ice cream and drinks, because I was really hungry! And guess what we were in the X-TREME screen at Sylvia park.

I never imagined that Fast And Furious 5 (the movie), was going to be better the part 1,2,3,4 but unexpectedly it was awesome. One of the best movie I have ever seen! It was definitely a highlight of my Easter Holiday.

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5 comments:

  1. DariusMay 10, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    Hi Starford

    I thought that the first introduction was the best out of both of them.

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  2. GabrielMay 11, 2011 at 12:45 PM

    Hi Star,

    I think the last para was the best for me. I would have picked the first one but it wasn't my type of intro. Any way, keep up the good work.

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  3. KingstonLMay 11, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    Hi Starford

    I liked the third one because it was cool how you explained the way you did'nt think the 5th part will be better than the 1st, 2nd, 3rd, and 4th.

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  4. Miss GardenMay 20, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    Immm... tough decision. They are both great introductions; hooking in your audience, and orientating us.
    I am voting for paragraph 2 because is was very clear and concise, and had strong emotive words.

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  5. StarfordJune 21, 2011 at 10:09 AM

    Thanks for the commenting on my blog everyone, I would be sure that I would comment on your blogs.

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