Step by step, His feet were plunging in the soft sand. walking through the beach, his eyes lids were shutting quickly. Everything was going dark. As He approached the sea, His toes were touching the white foam. Legs shaking, His body was about to collapse in the clear blue sea.
Looking for help, he spotted a crowd in the distance. Seeing all the family's have fun in the sand, his memories of his childhood started flooding back into his head. He remembered his name, which was Chang.
Hey Starford,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting series of events I hope Chang was alright. I would suggest you read back through and check your spelling, only for a few words.
Keep writing :) Mr. Hutchings