Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Picnic gone WRONG!


"Hurry up and get your hat, your gonna burn out there!" Sader Shouted at Chris from a distance. Chris quickly ran into class like flash to grab his hat. The whole school was going down to the Beach for a annual School picnic. The Beach they went to was Blues Beach. They've been at that school for a few years and this is their last year, which means it was their last picnic at Asap's Intermediate. "I can't wait!" Chris said with excitement!


Arriving at the beach, Chris and Sader saw everyone enjoying their time,and hearing laughter all around them. As they sat down with their class, their teacher Mr Faletagoai asked them nicely to put all their gear down and do whatever they want. Chris went off to play cricket with his other friends. "ahhhhhhhh" Sader sighed as he relaxed under the tree in peace, closing his eyes slowly he soon fell asleep.

After Sader finished his sleep, he quickly stood up and walked over to where his friends were playing cricket. "Can I play" Sader asked politely, "sure" his mate replied in a good tone. As they were playing, It was Sader's turn to bat. Chris was fielding, and the bowler started his run up, he bowled the ball at his best trying to get Sader out.

‘WHACK!’ Sader smashed the ball so hard the ball went flying out to the dark blue sea. “Nice one”  Taylor said as he was amazed with Sader’s skills. Chris was sprinting like flash to get that ball as it was floating in the sea. He dived in going to grab the ball, as he was swimming he spotted a big sharp fin in the water...”SHARK!”  Chris screamed his head off!

Swimming for his life, Chris started thinking to himself ‘am I gonna die today?’  that’s all he was thinking about. He was the faster swimmer in his school and he was pretty good, but the shark was faster. The shark was gaining on him quickly as Chris was losing his stamina. Snap! The Shark took a big bite but missed. Getting closer and closer to the bank Chris shouted “HELP, HELP, HELP!” Everyone heard him and went to help him. Running towards the sea they spotted some rocks and threw them at the shark and it began to swim back into the reef.

Chris eventually  got to shore and was not injured or harmed,

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